5/5
Mary edited my memoir full text of 322 pages. She made valuable and thoughtful suggestions for structure, narrative arc, character strength and development, paragraph impact, sentence clarity and power, grammar and syntax. In addition to hand written notes on every page of my manuscript, she wrote 8 pages of comments on my work, including suggestions for narrative form. Along the way, she identified strengths, appreciated aesthetic beauty and encouraged me to continue with the hard work. She help me appreciate the power of less, the beauty of uncrowded pages, and, as Mozart may have said, "The music is not in the notes, but in the silence between." Miles Davis said it his way, "Don't play what is there, play want is not there." Mary is in good company.