Fine Line Edits - Victoria, British Columbia

Ian Ralph

David is a delight to work with and a true Master of Words. I love collaborating with him - his energy, his love of language, and his professionalism are second-to-none. The quote from comedian Steve Martin applies to David: "I really enjoy finding the right word, creating a good, flowing sentence. I enjoy the rhythm of the words." They'd get along great.

Salman Almishari

I’ve had the pleasure of working with David from Fine Line Edits on multiple projects, and I can’t recommend him highly enough. With his PhD in English writing, David’s expertise goes far beyond the basics—he truly understands and enhances the essence of the writing. He took the time to grasp exactly what I needed and transformed my work into something more human and personalized. His deep knowledge and commitment to quality have consistently resulted in outstanding outcomes. If you’re looking for an editor who combines exceptional skill with a personal touch, David is the one to choose!

Looking forward to the next project.

Alexandra Friesen

David has been great with my listing descriptions! He has made things so much easier for me, as it's one less thing for me to think about when preparing my new listings. He has such a quick turnaround and always nails the write-up! Highly recommend him to any Realtors out there who need to start delegating!

Shape Design

David wrote strategic content and messaging for a website I was building. He put care and effort into every line on the site, and the final result was described by the client as "absolutely perfect." Some of the lines David wrote include:

"Fine custom homes. One step at a time."
"Great homes grow from many small pieces.”
“Why buy a house when you can build a home.”
"Su casa, su casa."

Thanks for your hard work!

Compass Massage Admin

We hired David to review our website because we wanted a fresh set of eyes to comb through our content, wording, grammar and more! We have had a few website developers over the years and a handful of website updates/ changes and we wanted someone to let us know how our business was being portrayed through our content. David did a fantastic job, we are immensely happy with his findings and suggestions on how to improve our overall messaging, delivery and professionalism. If you are a busy business owner-operator, we cannot recommend David's website audit services enough!

Tami Tate

A local branding studio recommended Fine Line Edits to us. And now I see why. David's work for our team at the Royal Victoria Marathon was very helpful. His audit of the website streamlined our content. He also delivered creative, strategic copy for advertisements as well as a campaign guide. Highly recommend!

Ryan D (Ryguy Victoria)

Collaborating with Dr. David Eso has been incredibly beneficial for my journey as a budding writer. His encouragement and positivity has fueled my passion for writing. David's feedback is thorough but also easy to understand. He communicates expert insights in a clear and concise manner. I wholeheartedly recommend him to anyone in need of editing assistance or looking to improve their writing skills. He brings professionalism, expertise, and genuine passion to his work, making the editing process both productive and enjoyable.

Melissa Huston

It has been a pleasure to work with David of Fine Line Edits. He took a generous amount of time to get to know me and my business before crafting communication to ensure the messaging was appropriate and authentic. Diligent and committed to quality, his efforts continued until he knew I was happy with the finished product. I look forward to working with David again on future projects and wholeheartedly recommend his services to anyone who needs skilled writing with thoughtful consideration.